Wetsuit Abduction

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Wetsuit Abduction

Post by Josh » Tue Sep 25, 2012 5:42 pm

Captured in the middle of the night, three surfer boys are forced into wetsuits and the zippers padlocked closed.
Transported to a waiting yacht, they are told they've been chosen to act as wetsuit slaves for millionaires across Europe.

Can they escape, or does a life in neoprene await them?

Wetsuit Abduction

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Post by manicman » Tue Sep 25, 2012 8:06 pm

has this not already been posted recently?

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Post by Josh » Tue Sep 25, 2012 10:23 pm

Full version now.

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Post by Jamie6369 » Thu Sep 27, 2012 4:42 pm

Thanks for the story, I really enjoyed it.

Well written and engaging.

At this point, people usually ask for more!! I don't know if you intend to carry on with the story, but here are some thoughts/ideas for future chapters, although from what I have read, you have enough imagination of your own!

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Assuming the lads they were kidnapped will be the targets for future attempts, they will have to get used to being locked in wetsuits, so they could take turns at locking each other up for a few days at a time.

They will also have to get used to being shaved by kidnappers, to de-sensitise them from this trauma, various random military people could be tasked to do it.

They will have to be able to fight when wearing a wetsuit, this could mean all training to be done in one :)

May be lock picking skills could be learnt - padlocked in a suit until they can pick the lock :)

They will have to go to lots of surfing spots, worldwide, where they keep an eye on potential targets. May be getting to really know some of them.
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Once again, thank you so much for going to the trouble of writing the story.

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Post by Josh » Thu Sep 27, 2012 8:37 pm

I wanted to leave the ending open for more and i'm glad you've asked. Let me see what i can do :twisted:

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Post by zeep » Fri Sep 28, 2012 9:25 am

so far its been great.

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Post by BlondGuppy » Fri Sep 28, 2012 8:13 pm

I've only read the first 8 or so paragraphs and am liking what I am reading!

Nice one Josh!
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Post by BlondGuppy » Fri Sep 28, 2012 10:21 pm

Have read it and its a great read. Will have to read it again when I am more alert so I can absorb all the detail!

Did like the rescue plan and the opening to the rescue. At times it was almost as if I was there, invisibly watching what was going on.

Nice one... please continue it!!!
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Post by Josh » Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:36 pm

Thaks for all the great replies. There will be more, it's just taking time to write. I'll see what i can work in from the suggestions.

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Post by danl72 » Sat Sep 29, 2012 9:41 pm

Great story. I always thought about what would happen if someone was kidnapped in a wetsuit.

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Re: Wetsuit Abduction

Post by Josh » Fri Jun 07, 2013 6:36 am

I see a story exactly the same as this has appeared on the front page

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Re: Wetsuit Abduction

Post by wetsuitlad » Fri Jun 07, 2013 8:20 am

Just been removed. Going to ban that user for life.

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